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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

I’m very happy to know that you were coining to visit my city by your own. I’m looking forward to your early arrive! There are a few more well-known places of interesting in my city, so I’d like to show you around when you arrive. If time permit, we can watch some alive Chinese operas and taste some typical Chinese snacks. I suggest you wear some warm clothes, while it’s becoming colder. Remember to tell me the exact time of the flight, I’ll meet you at the airport.

Hope you a pleasant journey.

Yours,

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】考查时态。根据第一句I’m very happy to know that you were coining to visit my city by your own. 以及I’m looking forward to your early arrive! 可知文章主要用了一般现在时，所以were 要改为are。

考查固定短语。独自用on one’s own 不是by

Look forward to 中to 为介词，所以后面接doing。

There are a few more well-known places of interesting in my city, 此句中表示城市中有著名的景点。没有比较，more 多余。

考查固定短语places of interest。Interesting 不对。

If time permit, we can watch some alive Chinese operas and taste some typical Chinese snacks.此句中if 引导条件状语从句，时态为一般现在时，所以permit 要用第三人称单数+s。

考查形容词。Alive 活着的，live现场的，此处表示观看现场直播。

考查连词。根据前后句语境可知 I suggest you wear some warm clothes, while it’s becoming colder. 前后句表示因果关系，因为天气变冷，所以建议多穿衣。所以while改为because。

Remember to tell me the exact time of the flight, I’ll meet you at the airport.此句中前边为祈使句，后变为完整的句子因此前后缺连词。此处为祈使句加and 加陈述句。

Hope you a pleasant journey. 此句中hope不可以加hope sb sth，wish可以。