Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你美国的笔友Tom来信说他要一个有关中国留学生回国情况的调查报告，向你询问有关情况。请你根据下面图表的内容给他写封回信，说明相关情况，并分析其原因。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 短文开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

参考词汇：人才回流reversal of the brain drain；海归人员returnee。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about the reversal of the brain drain in China,

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about the reversal of the brain drain in China, so I’m writing to introduce some relevant information to you.

There has been an increasing number of returnees since 2014. In 2014 alone, about 6.93 million returnees returned to China. Between 2015 and 2016, there were about 4.33 million coming back home. On top of that, the year 2017 witnessed a boom with a total of 18.62 million returnees.

This trend results from three reasons. Firstly, our government values returnees and has worked out a series of preferential policies, offering them opportunities to achieve success in their career. Secondly, they can enjoy ideal living and working conditions here in China. Most importantly, their roots are here in China.

I hope my introduction above can be of some help to your survey.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇书信：你美国的笔友Tom来信说他要一个有关中国留学生回国情况的调查报告，向你询问有关情况。请你根据下面图表的内容给他写封回信，说明相关情况，并分析其原因。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：relevant information（相关信息）；an increasing number of returnees（海归人数不断增加）；witnessed a boom（目睹了繁荣）；results from（起因）；a series of preferential policies（一系列的优惠政策）；working conditions（工作条件）；等。

第3步：根据图表提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，符合图表要求，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。