Question

【题目】假定你是李华，请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件，建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营，报名网站是www.pandacamp.com内容包括：

1.提出建议；

2.活动内容；

3.报名方式。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mary,

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mary,

Knowing that you're crazy about giant pandas, I can't wait to recommend you an interesting and meaningful summer camp - the Panda Breeder Summer Camp.

The camp falls on July 15th and lasts 5 days in Chengdu, Sichuan, where you have been dreaming of travelling. On the first day, all the participants will be given some basic panda-breeding lessons, which will help to better perform the next tasks. Then they are scheduled to spend the following four days visiting baby pandas and breeding them with the help of the zoo keepers. What an amazing experience it will be!

If you would like to apply, please log on the website www.pandacamp.com and fill in your personal information. I guarantee you a fabulous time.

Yours,

Li Hua .

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封建议信。

第一步：明确要求。假定你是李华，请给你的美国网友Mary写一封邮件，建议她报名参加今年7月为期5天的四川成都熊猫饲养员(breeder)夏令营，报名网站是www.pandacamp.com内容包括：1.提出建议；2.活动内容；3.报名方式。

第二步：列关键词。

can’t wait；recommend；fall on；dream of；perform；schedule；breed；with the help of；apply；log on；guarantee等等。

第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。

第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：First、Next等。注意，词数100 左右。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。