Question

14．假设你目前在英国参加语言培训班，住在Mrs．William家．你需要完成培训老师布置的作业：用英语描述你的房东．内容要点如下：
1．外貌特征；
2．容易相处；
3．对中国感兴趣．
注意：1．词数：l20词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
I'm now staying at Mrs．William's．         ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇记叙文，要求描述自己的房东或房东太太．内容包括：外貌特征；和蔼友善的性格，相处融洽的关系；经常照顾你的日常生活，如：洗衣等；对中国的历史文化很感兴趣；再根据自己的观点，来发表一下自己对房东或房东太太的看法．描述人物用一般现在时态；第三人称．常用到描述人物的词语有：be friendly to；get on well with； be interested in等．
She is of normal height by the western standard，with a slender figure，blond hair and big blue eyes．（高分句式一）
She usually wears a smile on her face and that makes her even more attractive．（高分句式二）
What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．（高分句式三）

解答 One possible version：
      I am now staying at Mrs．William's．She is said to be in her forties but looks much younger．She is of normal height by the western standard，with a slender figure，blond hair and big blue eyes．（高分句式一）She usually wears a smile on her face and that makes her even more attractive．（高分句式二）（简单描述）
I really like this outgoing woman．We get along well with each other．She always takes care of my daily life．She cooks and washes clothes for me．That makes me feel like at home．What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．（高分句式三）So she often reads books about China．She hope to visit China one day．I think If she comes to China，she must love our beautuful country．And she can visit some places of interest and meet some friendly Chinese．（对中国感兴趣）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．