Question

11．假设你是红星中学学生李华．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍你和同学上周去大凉山希望小学开展支教活动的全过程．
注意：词数不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：my classmates and i heated to Daliangshan Hope School carrying some books donated by our class．带着同学们捐赠的书籍，我们前往大凉山希望小学．carrying some books 现在分词做状语表示伴随状况；donated by our class 过去分词短语做后置定于修饰books．
句型二：The students participated in the class actively，which in turn inspired us．用which引导一个非限制定语从句．
句型三：Chattingand laughing，we felt it was the most enjoyable time．用Chattingand laughing两个现在分词短语放在句子开头做状语．

解答 Last Monday，as volunteer teachers，my classmates and i heated to Daliangshan Hope School carrying some books donated by our class．高分句型（一）Upon arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the whole school．In the following days，we gave them lessons and patiently helped them with their studies．The students participated in the class actively，which in turn inspired us．高分句型（二）After class we played basketball together．We also showed them our school life on our IPad．Chattingand laughing，we felt it was the most enjoyable time．高分句型（三）Seven days flew by，it was time for us to say goodbye．Many students came to see us off．We hugged each other and expressed our wish to see each other soon．（这段叙述事情）
    In this activity，i experienced the happiness of helping others．（最后一段发表心情）

点评 本次作文为图画类，主要考查学生观察能力、分析能力、想象能力、创造和语言表达能力．同学们要想写好，需注意几点：1．仔细审题，确定文体人称和时态；2．找全要点，兼顾图画内外；3．准确表达，尽量避免错误；4．仔细检查修改．