Question

1．近期，雾霾天气频频发生，空气质量越来越差，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注．
作为一名青少年，我们如何尽自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请提出你自己的几点建议．
要点：
1．环境的现状；2．环保受到人们的更多关注；3．应采取的措施．
注意：词数100-120（开头不计入总词数）．
Recently，the Dust-haze weather hit China over and over again．                                                                           

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇倡议书，根据题目要求可知需要用第一人称和一般现在时态来写．内容包括：一环境的现状；二环保受到人们的更多关注；以及造成空气污染的原因；三应采取的措施．
高分句型：
1，As we all know，it's the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution．句子里As 引导非限制性定语从句we all know，表示"正如我们所知"；it's  that 强调主语the development of industry and heavy traffic jams．
正如我们所知，是工业的发展和过多的车辆造成的空气污染．
2．As far as I'm concerned，every small step we take really counts．句子里As far as I'm concerned表示"就我而言，依我看来"；we take 是every small step 的定语从句，counts是主句的谓语动词，表示"重要"．
依我看来，我们采用的每一步都是重要的．

解答 Recently，the Dust-haze weather hit the north of China over and over again，which had a great effect on people's life and health．（环境的现状）As a result，people are becoming more and more concerned about our environment．As we all know，it's the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution．【高分句型一】So as a teenager，I think we should take some measures to protect our environment．（环保受到人们的更多关注；以及造成空气污染的原因）
       On one hand，we'd better launch a campaign to raise people's awareness of environmental protection．Also we can hold a speech contest about protecting environment to stress the importance of living a low-carbon life．On the other hand，do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike．As far as I'm concerned，every small step we take really counts．【高分句型二】So please remember：together，individuals can make a difference．（应采取的措施）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
这里作文的需要写的内容提纲已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．同时注意题目要求词数120词左右，写的字数不要太多，也不能太少．