Question

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作

Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely

 ignoring their friends around.  

要求：

（1）就此材料发表你的感想；

（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

（3）在答题卡上作答，字数不少于60。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

As is shown in a survey conducted recently, an increasing number of young people are currently abandoning themselves to their cellphone world, without caring about their friends nearby.

As far as I’m concerned, it is not advisable to behave this way and we should use the cellphone properly. Useful as the cellphone, it can by no means take the place of face-to face communication. Furthermore, it is absolutely impolite to keep playing with cellphone, ignoring our friends around.

Therefore, there is no denying that we are supposed to put our phones aside to enjoy a better social life with our friends.

【解析】

   这是一篇就一个社会现象，发表自己看法的议论文。首先审题：社会现象应用一般现在时表示。材料：Nowadays, many young people get addicted to playing their cellphones wherever they are, completely

 ignoring their friends around.  现在，许多年轻人无论在哪里都沉迷于玩自己手机，完全无视他们身边的朋友。表明了作者对这种现象的基本态度----不赞成这样做。所以，组织短文时：

首先，用三段式写作。第一段简单介绍这种现象，引入话题。第二段说明自己的观点，并陈述原因。原因应尽可能具体、结合实际，同时注意行文前后逻辑合理。最后，换一种表达来表明自己的观点，起到画龙点睛的作用。

【亮点说明】

文章用三段式来分别说明1. 总玩手机忽视同伴的现象。2. 这种现象所造成的不良影响。3. 得出结论，明确观点。文中用到了conducted currently 做后置定语，ignoring our friends around, 做伴随状语， properly, absolutely, furthermore, therefore,高级词汇， by no means, abandon oneself to, take the place of. be supposed to do sth., put sth. aside 固定短语，as far as I am concerned, useful as the cellphone倒装句，there is no denying that, 等固定句型，使文章看起来层次分明，要点齐全，句式丰富，内容充实。

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