Question

19．你所在的研究性学习小组对"中学生的健康状况"进行了一次调查，主要调查结果如下：

现状： 身体素质逐年下降 肥胖人数增多 原因： 学习紧张，体育锻炼少 较少参加家务等体力劳动 饮食不均衡 专家建议： 少上网聊天，保证睡眠 每天运动一小时 多吃蔬菜水果，不吃垃圾食品

[写作内容]
请根据以上信息写一篇英语短文，在英文校报上投稿．内容包括：
中学生的健康现状、原因及专家建议．
[写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．短文的开头已给出，不计在5个句子中．
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．
（Last week，we made a survey about middle school students'health condition．）

Answer 1

分析 句型一：The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight．这项调查表明中学生的健康水平正逐年下降，越来越多的人有超重问题．本句中that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight是一个that引导的宾语从句，从句中with的复合结构是在句中做状语．
句型二：One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises．原因之一是他们在学习上的沉重负担使得他们很少进行身体的锻炼．本句中that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises是一个表语从句，其中so that they seldom do physical exercises是结果状语从句．
句型三：To solve the problem，experts advise that we should not chat on line so often  so that we can have enough sleep and we should do sports for at least one hour a day．本句是个复和句，其中that引导的是advise的宾语从句we should not chat on line so often  so that we can have enough sleep 与we should do sports for at least one hour a day是并列宾语．其中so that引导的是结果状语从句．

解答 Last week，we made a survey about middle school students'health condition．The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of overweight（句型一）．One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom do physical exercises（句型二）．What's more，they don't do labor work like housework and they don't have a balanced diet．【阐明问题】To solve the problem，experts advise that we should not chat on line so often so that we can have enough sleep and we should do sports for at least one hour a day（句型三）．Besides，we'd better eat more of fruits and vegetables and refuse junk foods．【专家建议解决问题】

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．