Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你所在的学校将要举办一场春节庆祝活动。你和你的同学邀请你校的美国交换生Tom参加。请你一封信给Tom，要点如下：

1.邀请Tom一起表演，一个中西合璧的节目；

2.活动时间：农历12月30日晚7：00---10：00；

3.活动地点：学校学术报告厅。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. __________

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____________________________________________________________________________________________

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We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. With the Spring Festival approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school. A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances, games, and gift-exchanging, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. To get fully involved, I , together with my classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of both our culture and yours. By the way, the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 7:00 pm to 10:00 pm on December 30, according to the Chinese lunar calendar.

We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华，你所在的学校将要举办一场春节庆祝活动。你和你的同学邀请你校的美国交换生Tom参加。请你一封信给Tom，要点如下：1.邀请Tom一起表演，一个中西合璧的节目；2.活动时间：农历12月30日晚7：00---10：00；3.活动地点：学校学术报告厅。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，但不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。非限制性定语从句的使用：……which will surely enable you to know better about our culture.动词不定式表目的的使用：To get fully involved,连接词的使用也是一大亮点：such as，together with，By the way，according to。