Question

10．假设你校举办看图征文活动，题目为"How to protect your eyesight"．请你用英语写一篇短文，指出图中所反映的现象，并从阅读时间，光线，眼保健操及睡眠等方面，谈谈保护眼睛的具体做法．
注意：
1．词数100-120字；
2．可适当加入细节，以便行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：近视-----near-sighted    眼保健操------eye exercise
How to protect our eyesight
                                             

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
As far as I am concerned①，measures should be taken②to protect our eyesight．我个人认为，应该采取一些措施来保护我们的视力．
①As far as I am concerned意为：我个人认为，就我个人而言．
②由于主语measures与动词take构成被动关系，故用情态动词should的被动语态形式，即should be taken．
句型二：
Thirdly，doing eye exercises ①regularly every day is a great necessity②．
第三，每天都做眼保健操是非常必要的．
①doing eye exercises 为动名词短语作主语，表示抽象动作．
②a great necessity指一件有必要的事情，其中necessity是可数名词．

解答 How to Protect Our Eyesight
    Now in schools，more and more students got near-sighted．As is shown in the picture，more than 80% of the students in our class wear glasses．（指出了图中所反映的现象）And it's not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon．
    Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes．I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired
in the poor light．In addition，lack of sleep also contributes to this result．（分析了三个导致近视的原因）
    As far as I am concerned，measures should be taken to protect our eyesight．【高分句型一】Firstly，students should be given more time to do some exercise to refresh ourselves．Secondly，learning conditions need to be improved，especially the poor light in the class room．Thirdly，doing eye exercises regularly every day is a great necessity【高分句型二】．Besides，enough sleep also contributes to the improvement．（提出了四点保护眼睛的做法）

点评 本题提供的是图画，主要考查考生的观察力、思考力以及表达能力；因此要求考生应结合题目的要求，看懂了意思之后再进行写作；具体做法是：首先，根据图画内容整理出几个要点，再根据这些要点决定要采用的语言形式，包括确定文中的人称，时态以及选用相应的句式结构，并且还要写出自己的看法．