Question

【题目】假如你是李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：

1．开始学习高中英语时，觉得比初中英语难得多，几乎丧失信心；

2．后来认识到英语的重要性；

3．每天努力学习英语；

4．向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法；

5．现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣；

6．信的开头结尾已给出。

提示：初中 junior high school 高中 senior high school

词数：100左右。

Dear Mr. Li,

I am glad to tell you that ______________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Li,

I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.

When I started senior English m the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.

Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested m learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先审题，假如你是李华，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：1、开始学习高中英语时，觉得比初中英语难得多，几乎丧失信心。2、后来认识到英语的重要性。3、每天努力学习英语。4、向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法。5、现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣。6、信的开头结尾已给出。其次要确定时态，表示发生在过去的事情，用一般过去时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.这里含有一个宾语从句。When I started senior English m the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart.这里含有一个时间状语从句。