Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、家庭工作业余生活.

注意：1、字数100左右； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息和要求来写作。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、要在给出的信息范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照时间顺序进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.是宾语从句。I will do a good job in whatever I do.是让步状语从句。此外，文章还多次使用I will…作为句子的开头，形成排比，使文章更有气势和条理。大量短语的使用，如：be like ，in the future，by then，get along well with，do a good job，In one’s free time，such as，In a word等使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。