Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

My family and I go to the Big Island of Hawaii in the United States every year. Each year, we do the same things-spend time at the beaches, surfing and fishing. On this trip, however, my family got tired of this holiday style and wanted to do something different. We learned from a local that there was a hot spring on the island called the Boiling Pots. Without doing any research, we decided to set off on an adventure to that spot.

We drove to the destination, but were surprised to find that the area was closed off by a fence (栅栏). Reading the sign placed in front of the gate, we found out it was, in fact, a forbidden area that lay at the bottom of the mountain. And we were on the mountaintop. Seemingly out of nowhere, a strange man came up to us. He told us he would go to the Boiling Pots and that he would show us the way down there if we would just jump over the fence and follow him. After some discussion, my family, 8 members, followed the man past the fence.

The 'path' was a slope (斜坡) covered in mud and high grass. Several times, our members fell but nobody gave up and turned back because it seemed an amazing adventure.

After about one hour's walk, we arrived at the bottom finally, but a large river stopped us. The strange man went to borrow a boat from his friend living nearby. We stood on the bank, waiting for him and joking that we could swim across the river.

Just then, I heard the voice of my father screaming at us to move. I looked up to the sky and saw a large tree falling towards us. I ran forward, pushing the people in front of me. I fell to the ground, hearing a loud sound of the tree hitting the ground, along with pieces of branches surrounding us.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

In a second, all went quiet

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Paragraph 2:

When we had no idea what to do, the strange man came back.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

In a second all went quiet. I slowly got up, looking around to see if anyone was hurt. However, one person did it faster than me. It was my father. He rushed to us, asking us, 'Is everyone OK?' His voice was full of anxiety and love. Luckily, all were safe, except my little sister who had injured her left knee. We all surrounded her to check whether she could walk normally. She tried to stand up but failed because of the ache.

Paragraph 2:

When we had no idea what to do, the strange man came back. He said that the moment he heard the loud sound, he returned immediately. Seeing what we had experienced, he said sorry to us again and again, and told us the dangerous situation could be the reason why the area was a forbidden one. We had to give up our plan to the hot spring. With the strange man's help, we made a little 'bed' with the branches, and carried my little sister back finally. What an adventure!

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写。文章讲述了作者和家人在旅途中因为厌倦了每年相同的度假模式，跟着陌生人去寻找“温泉”的冒险经历。

续写分为两个部分。第一部分的开头是：一瞬间，一切都安静了……所以可以接着写：我慢慢站起来，四处张望，看有没有人受伤。但父亲动作比我快。他冲过来对我们说“大家都好吧？”他的声音充满了担心和爱。很幸运，我们都很安全，除了最小的妹妹受了伤。我们帮她处理好伤口，然后扶着她站起来。

第二部分的开头是：正当我们不知该如何时，那个陌生人回来了……所以可以接着写：他说他也听到了那个巨大的声音，因此立刻返回。看到我们的情况，他觉得很抱歉，说：“这个地方不准进来的原因就是随时可能有危险情况发生。”最终，我们经过商量决定放弃去温泉。在那个陌生人的帮助下，我们用藤曼做了一个简易的“床”，把妹妹抬回去。这真是一次“新鲜的”经历。

续写时应注意时态和人称的运用。用五个以上的关键词加大了写作的难度，考生应熟悉关键词，以便在适当时应用。写作完成后要按要求将关键词下划线。