Question

8．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友杰克写信询问你上周参加英语演讲比赛的情况，请根据以下提示，给他回一封信．内容包括：
1．赛前准备；
2．比赛结果．
注意：1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jack，
I'd like to share my experience of joining in the English speech contest last week with you． 
                                     
                                         Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，用英语写一封信．内容包括：1．赛前准备；2．比赛结果．3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：share with sb（与某人分享）；spoken English（英语口语）； take part in （参加）；refer to （查阅）； relate to （与…相关）；turne to sb（向某人求助）；insiste on （坚持）； looking forward to （盼望，期待）
高分句型：1．Therefore，the moment I heard our school would hold an English speech contest，I decided to take part in it．
                  the moment用作连词，译为"一…就"，本句意为"因此，一听到学校要举行英语演讲比赛我就决定参加"．
          2．Then，I turned to my teacher，①who②gave me some advice on how to give a good speech．
                             ①who引导定语从句，关系代词who指代先行词my teacher；②give sb advide on sth 给某人一些关于某事的建议．

解答 Dear Jack，
     I'd like to share my experience of joining in the English speech contest last week with you．
     I have always hoped to improve my ability in giving public speeches and my spoken English．Therefore，the moment I heard our school would hold an English speech contest，I decided to take part in it（高分句型一）．
      To prepare myself well for the speech，I did lots of work．First of all，I referred to many books to get information related to my topic．Then，I turned to my teacher，who gave me some advice on how to give a good speech．（高分句型二）Besides，I insisted on practicing it before the contest．Finally my hard work paid off．I came first in the contest．
    Looking forward to your latest news．
                                              Yours，
                                             Li Hua

点评 本题为提纲类写作，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．