Question

【题目】随着智能手机的普及，众多解答习题答案的作业APP出现。（即拍下一道题上传后，很快就会获得答案的软件。）越来越多的学生写作业用此类软件。请写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对这个现象的看法，要点如下：

优点：提高效率，节省时间；遇到不会的问题可以及时得到解决

缺点：过分依赖此类软件，不愿意思考问题等……

你的观点：……

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头语已为你写好；

3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, more and more students do their schoolwork with the help of kinds of APPs via the Internet. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. Firstly, the students can get what they want from APPs quickly, which saves them time on schoolwork. Secondly, if they find something difficult, it’s convenient to search APPs for answers. However, depending too much on them may bring some disadvantages. With no effort, some students copy online answers. As a result, they become lazy and develop bad studying habits. Worse still, it may kill their creative thinking. In my opinion, we may enjoy the convenience of APPs, but turn to it for help when it is really necessary.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语：Generally speaking一般来说；depend on依靠；As a result结果；Worse still更糟糕的是；Firstly, the students can get what they want from APPs quickly, which saves them time on schoolwork.运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句；However, depending too much on them may bring some disadvantages这个句子运用到动名词作主语。