Question

3．假设你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为"健康成长"的英语作文比赛．请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
1．乐观的人生态度；
2．努力学习；
3．参加体育锻炼．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文章的开头已给出不计入总词数．
We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things．      ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇要点文．写作时，首先要写全要点；其次要注意以第一人称来表达；最后，要注意时态以一般现在时态为主．
重点短语和句型：
attitude to 对待某事的态度
consist of 组成
in face of 面对
keep fit 保持健康
Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times．
句中not only…but also…不但…而且…，连接对称结构．
In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．
句中so that连接目的状语从句．
If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．
句中if连接条件状语从句．

解答 We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things．【点明主题】
      Firstly，we should develop a good attitude to life．Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times．（高分句型一）We should be brave in face of difficulties．Secondly，we must study hard because knowledge is power．If we have the power，we can help to build our country and enjoy life better．In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．（高分句型二）We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study．【表达看法】
      If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．（高分句型三）【总结中心】

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．