Question

【题目】短文改错

短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下方写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was young, I lived in a place where had a lot of trees, many rivers, and was near a big lake. We had a large house with a garden and lots of grasses. My brothers and sisters and I played outside whenever we could in my own yard, in our neighbors’ yards, and in the empty yards down the street. We ride bikes and played ballgames with friends. But I always thought that there was something missing in my environment, as wonderfully as it was. I liked going to the big lake the most. Even there, though, I felt I needed anything more. The lake was big, and you could still see land on the other side.

One day, my family took trip to New York City. As we drove on the freeway, I looked out the window at the ocean. For as far as I could see, there was no land on the other side. I rolled down the window and heard from the sounds of the sea birds. They seemed to call me, tell me I would never be able to live away from the sea again.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】第一句where改成that或者which

【2】第二句grasses改成grass

【3】第三句my改成our

【4】第四句ride改成rode

【5】第五句wonderfully改成wonderful

【6】第七句anything改成something

【7】第八句and改成but

【8】第九句在took trip间加a

【9】第十二句去掉from

【10】第十三句tell改成telling

【解析】

试题分析：小的时候，我住的地方在一个大湖边，那里有很多树，很多河流。我们有一个大房子，带花园，并种了很多草。只要有时间，哥哥，姐姐和我都会在我们自家院子，另据家的院子，甚至是街边的空院子里玩。

【1】where表示地点，等于the place which，第一句where改成that或者which考查代词。先行词为place，后面代词只能用that或which。

【2】第二句grasses改成grass考查名词的复数。Grass为不可数名词，单复数同形。

【3】第三句my改成our考查物主代词。根据情理可推测得知，此处的brothers and sisters不是“我”一个人的，而应该是一起玩的小伙伴的，故my改为our。

【4】第四句ride改成rode考查动词时态。根据上下文可知，本文为发生在过去的事，故用一般过去时。

【5】第五句wonderfully改成wonderful考查形容词。句子还原为it was wonderful，wonderfully是副词，形容动词和形容词。

【6】第七句anything改成something考查代词。Anything用于疑问句和否定句，陈述句用something。

【7】第八句and改成but考察关联词。句意为：这个湖很大，但你仍然可以看到对岸的景色。为转折关系，用but。

【8】第九句在took trip，名词前加冠词a表示泛指某一次旅行。Take a trip/trips to“去...旅行”。

【9】第十二句去掉from考查动词用法。Hear“听到，听见”；hear from“收到某人的来信；这里说我从窗户上跳下来，听海鸟的叫声。

【10】第十三句tell改成telling考查伴随状语。此处tell引导的分句为伴随状语，说明the bird call me的内容和原因。