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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I was often laughed at my classmates before I turned 14 because I was always very nervous when talking to someone. Helpful and sad, I felt that I could do nothing. You cannot imagine what great difficulty I have in my life. And later, something happened, what changed my life completely. It was an English speech contest and my mother encouraged me to take part in it. I tried her best to remember the whole speech “Believe in yourself” and practised them over 100 times. Believe it or not, I finally won the first prize. Heard the cheers from the teachers and students, I stood here, with my eyes full of excited tear.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】at后面加by

【2】Helpful→Helpless

【3】have→had

【4】And→But

【5】what→which

【6】her→my

【7】them→it

【8】Heard→Hearing

【9】here→there

【10】tear→tears

【解析】

【1】at后面加by 考查介词。laugh at sb.嘲笑某人，be laughed by sb.被某人嘲笑。

【2】Helpful→Helpless 考查形容词。句意：无助又悲伤的我什么也不能做。

【3】have→had 考查动词的时态。整个文章用一般过去时来叙述；故把have改为had。

【4】And→But 考查连词。句意：但是后来，发生一些事情。是转折关系，不是顺承关系，故把And改为But。

【5】what→which 考查定语从句。句意：后来发生了一些事情，这完全改变我的生活。先行词是something happened，关系词用which来代指整句话。

【6】her→my 考查代词。句意：我努力记住整个演讲稿并多次练习。

【7】them→it 考查代词。代指the whole speech用it。

【8】Heard→Hearing 考查非谓语动词。两个句子共用一个主语I，与hear之间是主谓关系，故用现在分词的形式。

【9】here→there 考查副词。句意：我听到老师和学生的欢呼，我站在那儿，热泪盈眶。

【10】tear→tears 考查名词。tear是可数名词，不知一滴眼泪，故要用复数。