Question

18．下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
This summer holiday，which I'm looking forward for，is coming．What great fun that it is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobby．I can ride my bike，climb high mountains，and go swimming．Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather．How interested my holiday will be!But my father was always afraid I might be hurt：drop from water，fall off a tree，hurt by a truck or something．But if I'm careless enough，how will these things happen？I must try best to persuade him．

Answer 1

分析 我期待的暑假就要来到了．我可以去钓鱼，踢足球，骑自行车，爬山等，我还可以和爷爷下象棋，但是爸爸却担心我会受到伤害，落水，从树上掉下来，被车撞到等其他事情，但是如果我足够细心，怎么会发生这些事情呢？我会尽力说服他的．

解答 This summer holiday，which I'm looking forward for，is coming．What great fun that it is to go fishing!Play football is one of my hobby．I can ride my bike，climb high mountains，and go swimming．Sometimes I can play chess with your grandfather．How interested my holiday will be!But my father was always afraid I might be hurt：drop from water，fall off a tree，∧hurt by a truck or something．But if I'm careless enough，how will these things happen？I must try∧best to persuade him．
详解：
1．for改为to；考查固定搭配，look forward to 是固定短语，意为"期待…"．
2．去掉that；考查感叹句，What great fun  it is to go fishing！是一个感叹句型，这里it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式短语，在句中what是一个多余成分，所以去掉．
3．Play 改为Playing；考查非谓语动词，这里用动名词形式在句中作主语．
4．hobby改为hobbies；考查名词的复数形式，one of 后面要跟名词的复数形式表示一个范围．
5．your改为my；考查人称代词，结合上下文分析句意应为"有时我可以和爷爷下象棋"，所以此处应该用人称代词my．
6．interested改为interesting；考查分词作形容词，现在分词作形容词修饰物，过去分词作形容词修饰人，这里修饰holiday，故用现在分词形式作形容词．
7．was改为is；考查动词的时态，结合上下文分析，此处应该用一般现在时陈述一个事实情况．
8．hurt前面加be；考查被动语态，I和动词hurt是被动关系，故前面加be构成被动语态．
9．careless改为careful；考查句意，分析句意应为"但是如果我足够细心，怎么会发生这些事情呢"，所以这里用careful．
10．best前面加my；考查固定搭配，try one's best 是固定搭配，意为"尽某人最大的努力"．

点评 通过快速阅读短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子间的结构关系，从词义，词性，固定短语，句式结构等方面去找文中存在的错误加以修改．