Question

10．假定你叫李华，你的笔友Peter来信询问你校情况．请根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件．

Location	In the center of the city
Year of building	In 1957
Basic information	beautiful campus；modern teaching facilities sixty classes；about 3，000 students experienced teachers；lively and interesting classes；hard-working teachers
Achievement	educate many students of high quality one of the best schools in the city

注意：
1．开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数；
    2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
    3．词数100左右．
Dear Peter，
It's great to receive your e-mailNow I'd like to tell you something about our school．Our school lies in the center of the city．It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years．（高分句型一）Now，there are sixty classes and about 3，000 students in our school．It has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities．The teachers in our school are very experienced，and they often make their classes lively and interesting．（高分句型二）Also，they all work hard and put their hearts into teaching．Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school．（高分句型三）It is now one of the best schools in the city．
I'm sure our school will become more and more beautiful．                                                               
Yours，
                                                                            Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息你的笔友Peter来信询问你校情况．请根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：Location；Year of building；Basic information；Achievement 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：lie in 位于；put their hearts into 全身心的投入； experienced有经验的；more and more beautiful越来越漂亮It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years．（高分句型一）
The teachers in our school are very experienced，and they often make their classes lively and interesting．（高分句型二）
Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school．（高分句型三

解答 Dear Peter，
       It's great to receive your e-mail．Now I'd like to tell you something about our school．Our school lies in the center of the city．It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years．（高分句型一）Now，there are sixty classes and about 3，000 students in our school．It has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities．The teachers in our school are very experienced，and they often make their classes lively and interesting．（高分句型二）Also，they all work hard and put their hearts into teaching．Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school．（高分句型三）It is now one of the best schools in the city．
      I'm sure our school will become more and more beautiful．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．