Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇 150词左右的文章。

Cloud tourism “refers to a new, non-contact immersive(沉浸式的)sight-seeing experience that depends on advanced technology, like live streaming.5G technology and virtual reality.

It has enjoyed great popularity in China recently. A 65-year old man said: “I visited Dunhuang on WeChat on May 1.” “I had never experienced a travel without getting out there like that. It is quite convenient, and I can learn a lot in the flower show, because there are vivid photos and detailed explanations,” a young office employee said.

However, many argue that “cloud tourism” is not tourism at all. Here are some comments.

Li Ming: “It is more of a documentary ,and I could not enjoy myself.”

Ma Dong: “I don’t want to travel on the phone. I would rather travel with my family and friends.”

（写作内容）

1、请用30词概括上述信息的主要内容；

2、你是如何看待“云旅游现象”，请简要说明理由(不少于两点)。

（写作要求）

1、写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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Answer 1

【答案】Cloud tourism, a new kind of tour realized by advanced tech, enables people to travel without going out. It is now gaining currency nationwide, yet receiving a mixed reception.

(反对)I am against it. First, it costs us the real joy we would otherwise get from real-life travelling, of which the value lies not in the places we will reach, but the wonders and diversities nature and our life can offer on the way. Pictures shared or stored on the cloud can never match the picturesque memories imprinted under the cloud. Second, be it personal or rational, it will no doubt cloud the travel where family and friends are supposed to gather together. Buried in your desired places online, you happen to find your beloved ones on cloud nine doing the same thing as yours. No more sweet blames about irrational choices of routes or collective decisions. No more.

Overall, once cloud tourism is embraced, sweet memories will fade.

(支持)I am for it. First, the convenience it offers is of benefit to old and young alike, as we can have access to places desired without the limit of time, space, energy and money. The once impossible adventures can happen everywhere, curiosity of historical and cultural relics can be easily satisfied, and happiness can be instilled whenever we want. Second, with it, we will never have to worry about the lack of knowledge and taste that shuts us from appreciating history, culture and nature. Now, well-trained professionals, well-informed guides, and well-prepared v-loggers will be there all the time, holding your hands through the cloud in the sky, serving you with wonders, wits and tales you desire.

Overall, cloud tourism will work wonders, making us free on the move on cloud nine.

【解析】

这是一篇读写任务。

第1步：根据提示可知，写作内容：1、请用30词概括上述信息的主要内容；2、你是如何看待“云旅游现象”，请简要说明理由(不少于两点)。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：cloud tourism(云旅游)；advanced tech (先进科技)；enable sb. to do sth.(让某人能够做某事)；lie in(在于)；be supposed to (应该)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。