Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校将到黄山风景区举行“我爱黄山（Mr. Huangshan）”主题活动。请你给交换生James发一封邮件告知活动相关情况。内容包括：

1.时间和地点；

2.活动安排；

3.注意事项。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear James,

I’m Li Hua. Our school will have an activity to call on people to love Mt. Huangshan. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.

We are to meet at the school gate at 7 o’clock this Saturday morning and then go to Mt. Huangshan by bus. On arriving there, we’ll pick up the litter in Mt. Huangshan. A speech about the importance of protecting natural heritage will also be given.

Since the activity will last to 3 o’clock in the afternoon, you’d better wear comfortable shoes. Besides, everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it.

Would you like to join us? Hope to see you then.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文为一篇应用文中的书信，主要是介绍主题活动的内容。写时要注意书信的格式。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，时态以一般将来时为主。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

亮点分析，文章第一段点明邮件的原因。第二段首先具体介绍了活动牟时间和地点，接着是活动安排。在活动安排时，用一个非谓语on arriing there作状语。 最后的注意事项是由since引导的状语从句完成的：Since the activity will last to 3 o’clock in the afternoon, you’d better wear comfortable shoes. 在文中交替使用主动语态和被动语态。句式时有变化，使用了一些复合句，单句和复各交互运用。使用一些较高级的词汇如call on people to do, invite sb to take part in , expect to do,would ike to join us 及hope to see 等。也使用一些连词如then. Besides,使文章通顺，有条理。