Question

【题目】假定你是李华。从学校通告栏上看到某公司招聘海外游学团领队的广告，你很感兴趣。请写一封英文电子邮件咨询此职位的工作职责、资历要求及报酬等相关信息。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考词汇：通告栏 notice board；游学团 study tour

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I recently saw your ad on the school notice board seeking tour leaders for your company’s upcoming overseas study tour. I am very excited by the possibility of taking part in such a tour and would definitely like to apply. To make sure my application is as strong as possible there are a few questions I hope to ask you before I submit.

First of all, how many middle school students will each tour leader be responsible for? Are tour leaders expected to have previous experience supervising middle school students? What duties are the leaders expected to perform? And finally, are the tour leader positions paid or voluntary?

I would greatly appreciate any information and advice you can give me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文为提纲类作文。根据从学校通告栏上看到某公司招聘海外游学团领队的广告，对此你很感兴趣，所以发封英文电子邮件咨询此职位。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时；3.文章的内容要点要齐全：此职位的工作职责、资历要求及报酬，还可适当询问一些与此职位相关的其他信息；4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，100单词左右。

【范文亮点】

1.文章运用了较多高分句式。例如“To make sure my application is strong as possible ，there are a few questions I hope to ask you before I submit.”运用不定式表示目的，做状语，make sure后面是省略了that引导的宾语从句。

2.“I would greatly appreciate any information and advice you can give me”这是很好的结尾句型。

3.文章采用了as......as“像……一样”，first of all首先，responsible for 对……负责；expected to期待，等高分短语和连接词。