Question

在很多学校食堂，浪费粮食的现象屡见不鲜。请结合你生活中的实际情况，谈谈下面两幅图给你的启示和感想。
注意：1.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和你学校的名字；
2．词数不少于120个。

                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                            

Answer 1

As is shown in the picture above, a large quantity of food is wasted in the school dining hall while in contrast to it, a starving little girl is swallowing something dirty, possibly from the rubbish, obviously suffering from hunger. These two pictures reflect what is going on in our daily life.—some are wasting a lot while some are starving.
We students living in the city always have enough to eat, and many of us are not aware of the significance of cherishing the food we have, leading to tons of rice being wasted every day. But when we regard three meals a day as a routine, just think there are children in poor area who are struggling for food. Before we abandon food in our plates, we should remind ourselves of the spreading problem of starvation and malnutrition.
Considering the serious problem, I hold the view that it’s high time that we should raise our awareness by taking steps to improve the situation, Just take meals we are able to consume, and treasure what we have and give a hand to those in need. It’s everybody’s responsibility to make our earth better. Stop wasting food, and we are sure to make a difference to the world.

试题分析：这是一篇开放式作文，也是看图作文，认真读图，可知图画反映了浪费粮食的现象的问题，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】这篇书面表达结构清晰，复杂句居多，还使用了一些常用的短语：regard …as认为…是， remind …. of提醒….， give a hand to助…一臂之力，be aware of意识到，make a difference to有影响，有差别， As is shown in the picture above, a large quantity of food is wasted in the school dining hall.这句话用了非限制性定语从句，while in contrast to it, a starving little girl is swallowing something dirty, possibly from the rubbish, obviously suffering from hunger.这句话用了现在分词做状语， These two pictures reflect what is going on in our daily life—some are wasting a lot while some are starving.这句话用了宾语从句， We students living in the city always have enough to eat, and many of us are not aware of the significance of cherishing the food we have, leading to tons of rice being wasted every day.这句话用了现在分词做定语，和现在分词做伴随状语， Considering the serious problem, I hold the view that it’s high time that we should raise our awareness by taking steps to improve the situation, 这句话用了评述性状语，同位语从句和虚拟语气， It’s everybody’s responsibility to make our earth better. 这句话用了it做形式主语。