Question

6．针对学生身体素质的不断下降，教育部提出了在各校开展"阳光体育"的活动．目的是以此活动改善学生体质．请你根据你校开展的情况及其带来的益处，用英语写一篇文章并简要发表你的看法．
参考词汇：阳光体育活动  Sunshine Sports Campaign
词数：120词左右
Given the decline of students'fitness，the Department of Education has launched ________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
We can see the fact that in the sports courts more and more boys and girls are involved in various outdoor activities．
我们可以看到这样一个事实：在运动场上，越来越多的男孩和女孩们都参与了各种户外运动．
本句是同位语从句，that从句解释说明的正是 the fact 的具体内容．
句型二：
It  not only enriches our school life but helps us relieve some stress from studies．
它不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且还帮助我们缓解了一些学习上的压力．
并列连词not only …but （also）"不但…，而且…"在本句中连接了两个谓语部分；其中，but之后的also可以省略．

解答 A possible version：
Given the decline of the students'fitness，the Department of Education has launched Sunshine Sports Campaign，which is aimed at improving students'health．（补充该项活动的目的；即提出论点）
This campaign is well welcome to most of the students in our school because they are free to choose what they like to participate in and have more time to take exercise．We can see the fact that in the sports courts more and more boys and girls are involved in various outdoor activities．【高分句型一】（论述了该项活动在我校的开展情况）It not only enriches our school life but helps us relieve some stress from studies．【高分句型二】After exercising，we feel satisfied and refreshed．What's more，it also develops our efficiency in our class lessons．（论证了开展该项活动的好处．）
Surely，I like it．I hope this activity should be promoted continuously．Through this campaign，we teenagers will form a lifelong habit of doing sports..（总结自己的观点）

点评 首先应注意议论文写作的三个要素：1、提出论点；2、组织论据，进行论证；3、得出结论； 其次，除了学会套用一些常用的句型和短语外，还需要根据题目的具体内容和要求，灵活地选用句式；另外，根据句子语气的需要，可在英语句中适当地增加一些情态动词"should/can/may/had better/must"，以及句与句之间合理使用一些并列、递进、转折等关系的关联词语，这样，议论文的结构会更加严谨，更具说服力和感染力．