Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In the summer vacation, our family travelled to Xiamen and paid visit to my brother there.The journey we were walking on was long and bored. But as soon as I arrived, I fall in love with the city. The reason is because it is a very charming place.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Besides, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careless when crossing the street.

Answer 1

【答案】1. pay后加a

2. bored---boring

3.fall---fell

4.because---that

5.cleaning---clean

6. to blowing的to去掉

7. far--- long

8.Besides---However

9. driver---drivers

10. careless---careful

【解析】１.固定搭配：ｐａｙ　ａ　ｖｉｓｉｔ　ｔｏ对―――的访问，可知在pay后加a。

２.句意：旅途是令人厌烦的。故把bored---boring。

３.本文在讲过去的事情，根据as soon as I arrived,可知主句用一般过去时态，故把fall---fell。

４. The reason做主语，后面的比偶语从句用ｔｈａｔ引导，故把because---that。

５.句意：街道是干净的，天空是蓝色的。用形容词作表语，故把cleaning---clean。

６. 句意：你会感觉到风正吹在你的脸上。此处是现在分词做宾语补足语，feel+宾语+doing sth.，故把to blowing的to去掉。

7.句意：只要允许，你也可以钓鱼。As long as只要，故把far--- long。

8.句意：然而，我认为那里的司机在大街上开得太快。此处表示转折，故把Besides---However。

9.句意：然而，我认为那里的司机在大街上开得太快。“那里的司机”应该是一个复数概念，故把driver---drivers。

10.句意：当你穿过大街的时候，越细心越好。根据句意可知把careless---careful。