Question

【题目】假定你校正在开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你以此为题用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：

1.创建绿色校园的意义；2.列举一些校园浪费的现象；3.发出倡议。

注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

As is known to all, our school has launched a program in order to build a green campus.

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That’s all, thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】Right now wasting can be seen on campus. Some food is thrown away in the school canteen while plastic bags are seen everywhere. Electricity and water are also being wasted in, the dormitory. It is everyone’s duty to build a green camp us. Therefore, it is high time that some measures should be taken. First of all, we’d better eat up what we buy. Secondly, we should not use plastic bags. Besides, we should form a good habit of turning off the light and the water tap when we don’t use them.

If we change our way of life, we can make the earth a better place.

【解析】本文是一篇演讲式作文。属于提纲式作文。本文就你校正在开展“创建绿色校园”活动为主题写一篇演讲稿。因此首先要确定要介绍的主题和目的。语言形式一般来说比较简单，较少采用复杂的句式，可使用长短句，有张有弛，富有节奏感。接着在确定介绍的观点及其逻辑顺序，有步骤地把演讲稿的思想内容的表现的张弛起伏，使其具有整体感。最后结尾，要言简意赅，让听众精神振奋，使听众产生共鸣。

亮点：本文语言精炼，内容丰富，有节奏感。被动语态为主，同时又有主动语态。使用了非谓语（wasting can be seen on campus.）和It is high time that+虚拟语气（it is high time that some measures should be taken）。句式较为灵活多变，以简单句为主，但又运用了较为简单的状语从句。如由while引导的从句（ while plastic bags are seen everywhere）；由when引导的状语从句（…when we don’t use them）和由if引导的从句（If we change our way of life, we can make the earth a better place.）句子有长有短，有张有弛，富有节奏感。同时顺序连词如“First of all, ….. Secondly, …. Besides”的运用恰到好处，有层次，更具有整体感。