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2．假定你是Jack，你的中国朋友李华作为交换生刚到英国学习不久，他被邀请参加一个英国家庭的家庭宴会，他不知道该如何做才合适，请你给他通过电子邮件提出一些建议：
1．穿着要精干   
2．按时到达  
3．带上小礼物 （一瓶酒，一盒巧克力或鲜花 
4．就餐时要注意礼貌举止，不要喝太多的酒，不要大声喧哗
5．就餐后不要逗留太久         
6．一两天后给主人写答谢信
注意：1．词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
      2．文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数．
Dear Li Hua，
How is it going？Glad to receive your letter again．As for the family dinner party，I will give you some advice as follows．
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Yours sincerely
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇书信类作文，要点和信的开头结尾已经给出．我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多．需要注意不要偏离文章中心．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
  高级词汇 out of politeness （出于礼貌）  express your gratitude to their hospitality （向主人表达感谢）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
How is it going？Glad to receive your letter again．As for the family dinner party，I will give you some advice as follows．
As it is a formal party，you had better dress smartly．（高分句式一  ） You should arrive on time with some small gifts such as a bottle of wine，a box of chocolate or just a bunch of flowers．At dinner，do remember to mind your manners．Please don't drink too much and don't speak loudly．After the dinner，out of politeness，you should stay for a while to chat with other guests and the host，but don't overstay your welcome．One or two days later，it would be better to write a letter of thanks to the host to express your gratitude to their hospitality （好客）．（高分句式二）
Wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely
Jack

点评 本文属于书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．