Question

假设你是李华，请根据以下表格为英文报纸Teens写一篇评论，陈述你的观点。

报纸的优点	学生最喜爱栏目	两点建议
①了解很多信息，如音乐、文学、教育、体育、科技等。 ② 经常阅读该报，增长知识、拓宽视野、提高英语水平。	①名称：Help ②原因：帮助解决学习和生活上的问题。	① 开设环境教育栏目，介绍环境保护方面的知识。 ②......

注意：
①词数120左右。
②短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
③参考词汇：文学literature；拓宽视野broaden one’s horizons；栏目column
Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can...
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I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!

Answer 1

Teens is very popular among students. From this newspaper students can get information about a lot of things such as music, literature, education, sports, science and technology. And all articles are written in excellent English. Therefore, by reading Teens, students can not only gain more knowledge and broaden their horizons, but they can also improve their English, especially the abilities of English reading and writing. The students’ favourite column is Help because it can help them work out problems on their study or life.
I’d like to make two suggestions for the newspaper. First, it can start a new column named Environmental Education to introduce knowledge on how to protect the environment. Second, it may be a good idea for the newspaper to organize some reading competitions. I’m sure it will encourage more students to read Teens.
I hope Teens will be much more helpful to the students in the future!

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