Question

一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文、

1、 家庭

2、 工作

3、 业余生活

注意：1、次数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One Possible Version

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲作文，通过认真读题，我们明白了写作要求和目的。本文要求写十年后的我。应该用第一人称，时态多是一般将来时。写作前最好先根据给出的提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。最后串联起来。内容要点包括：十年后我的家庭、工作和业余生活。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。在100词左右的篇幅中，层次分明。并恰当地运用了一些句式和短语，如whatever I do宾语从句和with短语， get along well with、 take regular exercise，such as，尤其是In a word总结性的短语。

考点：提纲作文。