Question

11．假设你是高二（1）班的学生李华．最近，你在本班同学中做了一个调查，了解同学们过马路时是否有闯红灯的行为及其原因．请你给校报写一封信，报告调查结果，并就如何解决这一问题谈谈自己的建议．
Survey Results

Question	Answers	Percentage
Have you ever jaywalked across a street at a red traffic light？	Yes	71%
	No	29%

Reasons for jaywalking	Percentage
1．Following others	24%
2．Saving time	48%
3．Seeing empty streets	28%

提示词：jaywalk乱穿马路
注意：1．开头已为你写好．  2．词数不少于60．
Dear Editor，
    I'm Li Hua，from Class 1，Senior 2．I did a survey among my classmates about jaywalking recently．_______________________________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表类作文，题目中给出的材料为带有数据的图表，故动笔前先要认真观察图表数据，了解其所蕴含的信息．写作中应先简单描述一下图表内容，及中国式过马路的特点，并分析原因，提出自己的建议．然后列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥．结合材料可知本文主要是第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时．适当使用连词，序数词，注意从句的应用，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系
亮点部分  
According to the result，we find that about  71% students have you ever jaywalked across a street at a red traffic light while about 29% students have never done so．（高分句型）
Others lack safety awareness，thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together．（高分句型）What's more，some people will go across the street when seeing empty streets，which is also dangerous sometimes．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Editor，
    I'm Li Hua，from Class 1，Senior 2．I did a survey among my classmates about jaywalking recently．According to the result，we find that about  71% students have you ever jaywalked across a street at a red traffic light while about 29% students have never done so．（高分句型）The following are the reasons．
   There are there main reasons behind this phenomenon．Some people are always in a hurry，so they ignore the traffic signal to save time．Others lack safety awareness，thinking drivers have to stop because so many people cross the street together．（高分句型）What's more，some people will go across the street when seeing empty streets，which is also dangerous sometimes．（高分句型）
    Actually  jaywalking is very dangerous because it may lead to more traffic jams and accidents．I hope immediate measures should be taken to prevent this bad behavior．（高分句型）First，the public should beeducated to follow the traffic rules．Second，more overpasses should be builtto make it easy to cross the street．Besides，whoever breaks the traffic rules shouldbe severely punished．By doing so，we will be able to get around safely．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．