Question

5．假设你是李华，你的网友小明最近心情不好，特写信向你求助，请根据下列提示，给对方写一封100词左右的电子邮件．
1．建议朋友多参加户外活动，如爬山、打网球
2．与好书为伴，从书中获取乐趣
3．向家长、老师寻求帮助．
Dear Xiao Ming，
I am so worried about learning that                                             

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给最近心情不好的网友小明写一封电子邮件，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：建议朋友多参加户外活动，如爬山、打网球；与好书为伴，从书中获取乐趣；向家长、老师寻求帮助．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为引出话题．第二部分为给朋友的建议．第三部分为最后的期望．
重点短语与句型：
be worried about担心…
 offer sb sth 提供某人某物
may as well 不妨
 turn to求助于…
高分句型一：You may just as well read some and enjoy the fun that they bring you．此句用了that引导定语从句
高分句型二：Remember parents and teachers are always the close partners you can turn to whenever you are in trouble此句you can turn to 是定语从句，修饰the close partners，此外whenever引导让步状语从句．

解答 Dear Xiao Ming，
I'm so worried about learning that you have not been in a good mood these days．（引出话题）
In your letter，you expected me to offer you some good advice．I remember you often mentioned that you love reading books．You may just as well read some and enjoy the fun that they bring you（高分句型一）．Have you considered going in for outdoor activities such as climbing mountains and playing table tennis？Exercise can both benefit your physical body and help reduce your anxiety and sadness．Remember parents and teachers are always the close partners you can turn to whenever you are in trouble（高分句型二）．They are friendly and experienced．（给朋友的建议）
I hope what I said can help you out of trouble．（最后的期望）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．