Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

1． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear John,

Last summer, I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children. I have told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closely to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five

hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have a fun. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.

Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

1.take---took

2.have和told之间加been

3.fit后加for

4.join---joining

5.closely---close

6.so---such

7.happy---happily

8.that---which

9.把have a fun.中的a去掉

10.interests---interest

【解析】

1.take---took 根据句意可知是一般过去时态故把take---took。

2.have和told之间加been 根据句意可知I和tell之间是被动关系，故在have和told之间加been。

3.fit后加for 固定搭配 be fit for…适合---，故在fit后加for。

4.join---joining 固定结构 How about doing sth.?觉得做某事怎么样？故把join---joining。

5.closely---close 固定词组close to…靠近---，故把closely---close。

6.so---such 句意：这么美丽的地方。place是名词，故把so---such。

7.happy---happily 句意：幸福地唱，副词修饰动词，故把happy---happily。

8.that---which 前面整个句子作先行词，后面的非限制性定语从句用which引导，故把that---which 。

9.把have a fun.中的a去掉 固定结构have fun.快乐，开心。fun.前不用冠词，故把have a fun.中的a去掉。

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