Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lucy发邮件说她对中国传统文学非常感兴趣，但是在阅读时遇到了很多困难，比如很多汉字不认识，读不懂文章的意思等等，希望得到你的帮助。请用英文给Lucy回一封电子邮件，要点如下：

1．表示理解并给予安慰；

2．提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

1．词数100左右：

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。信中不能出现本人相关信息。

Dear Lucy,

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Best wishes!

yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lucy,

I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.

First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress!

Best wishes!

Yours

【解析】本文是一篇提纲类作文。要点已给出，根据要点文章可分两段来写，第一段首先要对Lucy对中国传统文化感兴趣表示感谢，并对她遇到的困难表示理解并给予安慰；第二段可结合自身实际提出有用的建议，并说明这些建议的理由。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称；2.时态：一般现在时；3.文章的内容要点要齐全；4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。6.注意文章的字数控制，1200单词左右。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点。且在各部分之间添加了适当内容，让要点的转折更流畅。另外作者在范文中使用了较多的复合句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。如宾语从句I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. 定语从句Turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. 及用it作形式主语It’s never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays.另外文章中使用了First, Second, 等使得文章层次明确清晰，使用了so, but等并列连词使行文连贯。