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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Tu Youyou, the first Chinese Nobel Prize winner in medicine, who was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province. She won the prize for his amazing contribution to the development of artemisinin (青蒿素), a highly effective treatment for malaria(虐疾). Her story is considered an inspired one.

In the last century, many people suffered from malaria, a dead disease which took away many lives every year. So Tu was determined to find a cure with it. She worked as hard as she could, asked for neither fame or fortune. Eventually, her efforts paid off. Tu and her team discovered artemisinin in 1971, that proved an effective medicine for treating malaria. Since then millions of lives had been saved across the globe. Tu’s successful story tells us that only if we are determined we go on the road to success.

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】本文介绍了中国第一个医药学诺贝尔奖的获得者屠呦呦。

第一处：考查简单句。Tu Youyou, the first Chinese Nobel Prize winner in medicine, was born in 1930 in Zhejiang Province.是一个简单句，Tu Youyou是句子主语，所以去掉who。

第二处：考查代词。屠呦呦是女的，所以his改成her。

第三处：考查v+ing。v+ed修饰人，而v+ing修饰物，这里修饰物，所以inspired改成inspiring。

第四处：考查形容词。句意：每年带走许多生命的一种致命的疾病。dead无生命的，deadly致命的，所以dead改成deadly。

第五处：考查固定用法。a cure for表示“治疗……的一种”，是固定用法，所以with改成for。

第六处：考查非谓语动词。ask与其逻辑主语She之间是主动关系，用现在分词，所以asked改成asking。

第七处：考查固定用法。句意：屠呦呦努力地工作，既不图名也不图利。neither nor“既不是……也不是”，是固定用法，所以or改成nor。

第八处：考查非限制性定语从句。which proved an effective medicine for treating malaria.是一个非限制性定语从句，关系词在从句中作主语，指代整个主句内容，所以that改成which。

第九处：考查时态。Since then“从那时以来”，这个句子应该用现在完成时，所以had改成have。

第十处：考查部分倒装。only﹢if条件句放在句首，主句谓语用部分倒装，所以第二个we之前加will / can。