Question

假设你是某中学高三(1)班学生李华。下面是你校布告栏里张贴的“征集接待家庭”的通知，请根据其内容用英语写一封申请信。词数不少于100。

注意：信的开头和结尾已经给出（不计入词数）。

HOST FAMILIES WANTED Some foreign teachers and students from an American high school will study in our school during the summer vacation. Host families are wanted to accommodate our friends. REQUIREMENTS: ◇ Good English. ◇ A SEPARATE room. ◇ transportation. ◇ … If interested, please send your APPLICATION IN ENGLISH to the International Department before SATURDAY. Please consult us for any further information.

 

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three.                                     

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Three. I’m writing in reply to the notice for host families. I think I have several reasons to accommodate one foreign friend. First, I believe my English is good enough to communicate with foreigners. Also, my good communication skills enable me to keep a good relationship with others. As for accommodation, my family live in a 4-room apartment and there is always a spare room for the guest. In addition, my home is very convenient in transportation. Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places. I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.

I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查书信类作文，要求写一封自荐信，是关于征集接待家庭的，要点都已经给出，是以通知的形式给出，写作前要读懂读透通知内容，包括语言，住宿和交通的情况做出说明，审题时注意本文使用的时态，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文里面的Its location makes it easy to take either subways or buses to most places.和 I have also got support from my parents, who said yes without hesitation when informed of my wish.还有要用适当的关联词把文章串联起来：象also, In addition,,等等。

考点：考查书信类短文写作。

点评：书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，词汇句型的选用，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。