Question

【题目】书面表达

2015年两会前夕， 原中央台记者柴静自费制作的关于环境污染的纪录片《穹顶之下》引起强烈反响。假如你是李华，应用英语给21世纪英文报写一封信，表达你的观点。

内容包括：1. 阐述柴静所做的事对我们生活的影响

2. 面临环境污染我们能做些什么

注意：1. 词数100 左右

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

Dear editor,

After watching the movie Under the Dome, I was deeply moved by what ChaiJing did. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes!

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

After watching the movie Under the Dome, I was deeply moved by what ChaiJing did The movie has aroused the public’s environmental awareness and is worthy of admiration.

Thanks to the movie, I’m strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment.

I approve of the view that everyone is supposed to take dffective measures to protect our environment from being polluted. For instance, we can choose green transport like walking and bicycling. Obviously, the government should strengthen the management of pollutant emission. Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome. We do need the immediate change.

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文。题目要求写一篇关于环保的文章，来谈谈自己的看法和建议。作文要点已经给出，可以分段分别论述所给要点，注意作文的连贯性，做到流畅、自然。最好使用第一人称和一般现在时来写。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be worthy of值得；Thanks to由于；approve of同意；take dffective measures to do采取措施做某事；Thanks to the movie, I’m strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment这个句子第一个that运用到宾语从句，第二that引导定语从句，to improve our environment做目的状语；Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome. We do need the immediate change.这个句子运用到only+状语从句+部分倒装；