Question

假设你是李华，今天上午第一节课上外教老师Michael的课迟到了，Michael要求你用英语写一份解释说明，内容要点如下：

背景	今天早上6:45分左右于公交车站
起因	李华等车上学时，不远处站着的一位老人突然跌倒在地
过程	李华走近，发现他已晕过去了
	正好有医生在场，对其实施急救
	李华拨打120，并一直在老人身边陪伴
结果	10分钟后救护车到达，李华才离开。李华迟到了7分钟。

   参考词汇：ambulance 救护车   first aid 急救  faint 晕厥
已提供的句子不算在五句内。
Dear Michael,
I am terribly sorry that I missed the first part of your class this morning. Now I am writing to explain to you what happened.
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I hope you can forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Michael,
I am terribly sorry that I missed the first part of your class this morning. Now I am writing to explain to you what happened.
At 6:45 this morning, I was waiting for the bus to school at the stop when an old man standing nearby fell onto the ground. I came closer and found he had fainted. Fortunately, a doctor, who happened to be there, started to give first aid to him. Meanwhile I dialed 120. We didn’t leave the man until the ambulance came 10 minutes later, and that’s why I was 7 minutes late for class.
I hope you can forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，你向外教解释迟到的原因。建议以时间为顺序来组织全文。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是时间和数字的表达法。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。