Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你在伦敦冬令营期间与同学们自行前往博物馆的完整过程，并以“My Experience in London”为题，给校刊“英语园地”写一篇英文稿件。

注意：1. 词数不少于60； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My Experience in London

Last winter vacation, my classmates and I went to London to attend a winter camp.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

My experience in London

Last winter vacation, my classmates and I went to London to attend a winter camp.

To better understand the history and culture of the city, we scheduled a “museum trip”. On Saturday morning we got up early and studied the map carefully to work out the route. One of my classmates suggested going there by bus to enjoy the street view. It was a long ride, so when we got off the double-decker bus, we seemed to lose our way. The streets looked busy and strange, and we had to ask a passerby for help. She pointed out the right direction and wished us a good day. Thanks to the friendly woman, we finally got to our destination.

It took us some effort, but we witnessed the real beauty of the city. The experience also enabled us to practice our English. What a terrific experience!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇图画作文，观察图片上提示的要点应该包括1. 查地图；2. 乘公交；3. 问路；4. 到达。本文应该用一般过去时。注意增加细节，使衔接合理，还要尽量用高中阶段学习词汇和句型。注意长短搭配。

【亮点说明】本文结构明确，思路清晰。分三段把内容要点都涵盖了。同时注意应用较高级的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如scheduled，work out，suggested going，Thanks to， It took us some effort, but ，和witnessed等等。并注意了句子的变化和衔接如so。