Question

团队合作(teamwork)在现代是非常重要的。请根据以下要点，简要写一篇关于teamwork的演讲稿，并表明你自己的看法。词数120左右。

为何重要：

1．是学习和工作必需的能力； 2．可节省时间，精力，资源；

3．彼此有机会相互学习；

合作对象：

1. 与志同道合的人合作容易理解，同甘共苦，心情愉快；

2. 与和自己差异较大的人合作可以学会宽容，并学会发掘别人优点。

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone! My topic today is “Teamwork”.

In this modern world, if we want to be informed or complete our work better and more efficiently, there is an urgent need for all of us to learn to cooperate with others. Not only can cooperation save us a lot of time, energy and resources, but also we can learn much from each other.

We’ll be lucky enough to find someone who holds the same belief to cooperate with due to the fact that we can understand each other and share our joy and sorrow happily. However, it can be difficult to cooperate with someone who is different from us in many respects. In this case, we'll have to learn to put up with some of his shortcomings and try to discover his advantages.

In my opinion, teamwork means we should try to listen to others’ opinions, never force our ideas on others and if he makes mistakes, and try to point them out in a polite way.

Thanks for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据要点写作，同时表明自己的看法，那么文章结构可分为：团队合作为何重要、合作对象以及自己对团队合作的看法。前两点需要涵盖题中所给的全部信息并进行扩展，可以结合自身实例。自己的看法则需逻辑清晰，字数不得少于120字，不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文中使用了较多较好的语法知识，. not only，but also语句，倒装句：Not only can cooperation save us a lot of time, energy and resources, but also we can learn much from each other；定语从句find someone who holds the same belief；同位语从句due to the fact that we can understand each other and share our joy and sorrow happily；it be强调句型：it can be difficult to cooperate with someone…；宾语从句：teamwork means we should try to listen to others’ opinions；祈使句：never force our ideas on others等。倒装句，同位语从句，强调句。定语，宾语从句等语法的使用使得文章语句丰富，阅读起来不显乏味枯燥，提升了文章的档次，也表现出灵活的语法运用。除此之外，范文中也有很多亮点词汇：informed，urgent need，due to，share our joy and sorrow happily，in many respects，put up with，不仅使用了较多较难词汇，且巧妙应用了俗语，丰富了文章内容，显示出丰富的阅读量。同时，范文中使用了However,，In this case, In my opinion,等短语，是文章结构非常清晰，增加了文章的连贯性，使文章上下联系紧密。

考点:考查材料类作文。