Question

2．随着越来越多的农村劳动力进入城市，在农村随之产生了一个特殊的未成年人群体--留守儿童．近日，你校即将开展帮助留守儿童的志愿者活动．假如你是校报英语专版的编辑，请根据下面的表格提示写一封倡议书，向全班同学发出倡议，关注留守儿童．
提示：
1．现状：农村有很多留守儿童．
2．提倡：1．与留守儿童交朋友；2．在生活方面关心照顾他们；3．在学习方面帮助他们．
要求：
1．词数：100词左右（文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2．根据所给信息可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：留守儿童left-behind children、
参考短语、句型：take care of，make friends with sb．，invite sb．to do sth．，help…with…
Dear classmates，
There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 本文是话题类的作文，要求写一封倡议书．向全班同学发出倡议，关注留守儿童．写作要点已经列出要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把要点表达清楚．
亮点句型一：I think we should do something to help them．我认为我们应该做些事情来帮助他们．本句中we should do something to help them是一个宾语从句，省略了引导词that．
亮点句型二：It is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us．这不仅对留守儿童有好处，而且对我们也很有帮助．not only…but also是并列连词，本句中并列表语good和helpful．

解答 Dear classmates，
     There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．Their parents can't take good care of them．I think we should do something to help them．（亮点句型一）First，we can make friends with them，for example，inviting them to our school or writing to them．Second，we are able to help them to have a better life by giving them daily products．Finally，we can help them with their lessons．
    This activity is very meaningful． It is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us．（亮点句型二）
Yours，
Editor

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．