Question

【题目】假如你是李华，决定和Ala一起去乡村度假，时间为一周。Alan 打算住旅馆，而你更希望自带物品露宿。请给Alan 写一封e-mail, 说服他和你一起露营。

Dear Alan,

I’m looking forward to staying in the countryside with you for one week this summer vacation.

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Yours truly

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alan,

I’m looking forward to staying in the countryside with you for one week this summer vacation. But I don’t think it is a good idea to stay at a hotel.

Camping costs less than staying at a hotel. Though we must put up our tent, use sleeping bags, etc. we can experience and appreciate the beauty of nature through breathing fresh air and listening to birds singing. Camping outside can also make us become braver. We may probably come across wild animals like snakes or wild pigs while hiking. In this situation, we have to overcome difficulties without our parents’ help. So I insist that we go camping instead. I hope you will agree with me.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，内容是给Alan 写一封e-mail，一起去乡村度假，说服他和你一起露营。本作文中只是给了背景信息，需要自己想出说服朋友跟你一起露营的理由。露营理由要分条阐述。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

亮点说明：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如look forward to，put up，come across；还运用句型：we can experience and appreciate the beauty of nature through breathing fresh air and listening to birds singing.这句运用了非谓语动词；So I insist that we go camping instead.这句话运用了虚拟语气等。并注意了句子的衔接如but，though，while，so等等。