Question

【题目】2022年北京—张家口冬奥会将在北京和张家口举行，为了确保冬奥会圆满成功，组委会发起了志愿者招募活动。假如你是北京某中学学生李华，希望能成为一名志愿者。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封申请信，内容如下:

基本情况	年龄、性别、学历
个人条件	英语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况
我的承诺	提供最佳服务

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear sir/madam,

My name is LiHua.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is LiHua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 BeijingZhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games.

I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing,where the Games will be held. I am good at spoken English. As a result , I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I’m especially fond of sports. As a local here, I am familiar with the city, which I think is my advantage. As an outgoing and enthusiastic girl, I am ready to help others. Therefore, I am suitable to be a volunteer in the Games. If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.

I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.

Yours faithfully,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。

第一步：

审题：申请信 申请当2022年北京—张家口冬奥会的志愿者

人称：第一人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分自我介绍基本情况，第二部分说明个人适合当志愿者的条件，第三部分表达你的承诺。

要点：

1. 自我介绍基本情况：年龄、性别、学历

2．说明个人适合当志愿者的条件：英语口语好、爱好体育、善于交往、乐于助人、熟悉本地情况

3．表达你的承诺：提供最佳服务

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

work as；a volunteer；the 2022 BeijingZhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games；hold；be good at；spoken English；communicate with；fluently；be fond of；be familiar with；advantage；outgoing；enthusiastic；be suitable to；try one’s best；provide；offer sb. sth.

第三步：连词成句

(1) I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 BeijingZhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games.

(2) I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing.

(3)The Games will be held in Beijing .

(4 )I am good at spoken English.

(5) I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

(6) I’m especially fond of sports.

(7) I am familiar with the city.

(8) I think it is my advantage.

(9) As an outgoing and enthusiastic girl, I am ready to help others.

(10) I am suitable to be a volunteer in the Games.

(11) If I am chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete in the Winter Olympic Games.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句，适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用定语从句连接下面两个句子

(2) I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing.

(3)The Games will be held in Beijing .

→I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing, where the Games will be held.

用表示因果关系的词连接下面两个句子

(4 )I am good at spoken English.

(5) I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. So I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. Therefore, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. As a consequence, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. As a result, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English, as a result of which I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

用状语从句的省略形式改写下面的句子

(11) If I am chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.

→ If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.

适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。