Question

【题目】假定你是李华， 是校报的英语小记者。最近，你校组织开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你针对这一活动，以“Building a Green Campus”为题写一篇报道，内容包括：

1.创建绿色校园的意义

2.一些校园浪费的现象

3.建绿色校园的建议并发出倡议

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Building a Green Campus

The campaign of “building a green campus” has been launched in our school in order to call on us to save resources and raise our awareness of environmental protection.

Waste on campus can be seen everywhere, which has become an increasingly serious problem. Food is thrown away everywhere, which will do harm to the environment.

It is everyone’s responsibility to build a green campus. First of all, we’d better carry on the campaign of “cleaning the plate”. Besides, we should resist using disposable chopsticks and recycle the plastic bags, which are basic measures to protect the environment on campus.

In a word, building a green campus needs us to make joint efforts by doing pieces of small matters in our daily life.

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假定你是李华， 是校报的英语小记者。最近，你校组织开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你针对这一活动，以“Building a Green Campus”为题写一篇报道，内容包括：1.创建绿色校园的意义2.一些校园浪费的现象3.建绿色校园的建议并发出倡议。其次要确定时态，表示客观事实，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，按照题目所给出的内容，逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在120左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如Waste on campus can be seen everywhere, which has become an increasingly serious problem.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句Food is thrown away everywhere, which will do harm to the environment.这里含有一个非限制性定语从句。It is everyone’s responsibility to build a green campus. 这里的it是形式主语。