Question

15．假设你叫王成．你的英国笔友Rose想了解你校学生的体育锻炼情况，请根据下图信息，给她写一封信，简要陈述你的看法．

75%的学生不参加体育锻炼	不爱好体育锻炼； 无锻炼场地； 学习负担重．
25%的学生参加体育锻炼	…

注意：
         1．词数120左右；
         2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Rose，
As we enter Senior Three，fewer and fewer students do physical training_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Wang Cheng．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Only in good health can we learn attentively．
高分句型二：
Secondly，as we all know，time is a spongy．
句型一 Only in good health can we learn attentively． 该句是一个only位于句首，修饰介词短语的倒装句，即主语同谓语部分的助动词进行位置的交换：can we learn attentively
句型二 as we all know 该句是一个由as 引导的费限制性定语，as在句中充当宾语，替代后面整个主句的内容．

解答 Dear Rose，
    As we enter Senior Three，fewer and fewer students do physical training．According to a survey，only 25% of the students do sports．They can benefit a lot from sports．（参与理由）There are many reasons for students not doing physical training．Some students complain that they have too much homework to do and have not enough time to do exercise．Some of them say that they aren't fond of doing physical training since childhood．Others say that they live far away from places where they can do physical training．（拒绝原因）Because of all these，many of us lack physical training and are in poor health．
   In my view，we should realize the importance of taking exercise．Firstly，without health，we can't learn well．Only in good health can we learn attentively．（高分句型一）Secondly，as we all know，time is a spongy．（高分句型二）We can find time to do exercise if study and physical training are balanced．In all，once we lose our health，we gain nothing．Let's do physical training right now．（个人观点）
  Best wishes，
  Wang Cheng

点评 本文是一个图标类书面表达，写作时应注意观察图表所提供的信息，尽量要将其所列内容清楚表达；另外考生平时应注意积累相应的词汇，用准确的、简介的语言将作文表达清楚．