Question

17．假如你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为"How to be healthy"，请你根据下面提示用英语写一篇发言稿．

存在问题	部分中学生身体素质差
解决方法	充足的睡眠 加强锻炼，增加户外活动 定时吃饭，少吃零食  养成讲卫生的习惯

注意：1．字数120左右；开头已给出，不计入总词汇，可适当发挥．
    2．生词：零食：non-staple food   卫生：hygiene
Dear friends．
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Answer 1

分析 提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作．要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
We have found out the fact that some middle school students are not kept in good health．（高分句型）带有that引导的同位语从句
Thirdly，remember to have three meals regularly and eat less non-staple food，which will do good to you．（高分句型）带有which引导的非限制性定语从句

解答 Dear friends，
We have found out the fact that some middle school students are not kept in good health．（高分句型） But what should we do to improve our physical condition？
First of all，you should get enough sleep．You'd better go to bed and get up regularly．Don't stay up．Secondly，you should take more exercise and do more outdoor activities to strengthen your body．Thirdly，remember to have three meals regularly and eat less non-staple food，which will do good to you．（高分句型）Finally，you'd better form the habit of paying due attention to hygiene．

点评 写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态．根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当．语言力求准确、简洁．根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．