Question

11．假设你校举办看图征文活动，题目为"How to protect your eyesight"．请你用英语写一篇短文，指出图中所反映的现象，并从阅读时间，光线，眼保健操及睡眠等方面，谈谈保护眼睛的具体做法．
注意：
1．词数100-120字；
2．可适当加入细节，以便行文连贯．
3．参考词汇：近视-----near-sighted
眼保健操------eye exercise
How to protect our eyesight
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
As far as I am concerned①，measures should be taken②to protect our eyesight．我个人认为，应该采取一些措施来保护我们的视力．
①As far as I am concerned意为：我个人认为，就我个人而言．
②由于主语measures与动词take构成被动关系，故用情态动词should的被动语态形式，即should be taken．
句型二：
Thirdly，doing eye exercises ①regularly every day is a great necessity②．
第三，每天都做眼保健操是非常必要的．
①doing eye exercises 为动名词短语作主语，表示抽象动作．
②a great necessity指一件有必要的事情，其中necessity是可数名词．

解答 How to Protect Our Eyesight
       Now in schools，more and more students got near-sighted．As is shown in the picture，more than 80% of the students in our class wear glasses．（指出了图中所反映的现象）And it's not difficult to find the causes to this phenomenon．
       Long time of studying in the classroom with no time to refresh our eyesight is one of the causes．I think poor light is also the cause because our eyes easily get tired in the poor light．In addition，lack of sleep also contributes to this result．（分析了三个导致近视的原因）
       As far as I am concerned，measures should be taken to protect our eyesight．【高分句型一】Firstly，students should be given more time to do some exercise to refresh ourselves．Secondly，learning conditions need to be improved，especially the poor light in the class room．Thirdly，doing eye exercises regularly every day is a great necessity【高分句型二】．Besides，enough sleep also contributes to the improvement．（提出了四点保护眼睛的做法）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．