Question

【题目】假设你是李华，下面是你校对学生近视情况做的调查，请你写一篇文章刊登在校报上，呼吁大家爱护眼睛，保护视力。

学生的近视率几乎达到了50%。

导致学生近视的原因：学习任务过重；长时间看电脑；不良的阅读习惯等等。

怎样预防近视：……

注意：1. 词数100词左右 2. 可以适当增加内容使行文连贯

参考词汇：近视：short-sighted

Recently, our school has done a survey about the short-sighted students in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, our school has done a survey about the short-sighted students in our school. According to the result, nearly 50% of the students have become short-sighted.

There are several reasons behind this result. First, students have too much homework to do every day and they are likely to overuse their eyes, thus making their eyes too tired. Second, some students spend too much time surfing the Internet, which is harmful to their eyes. Besides, some students’ bad reading habits damage their eyes, such as lying on the bed to read or reading in dim light.

To protect our eyes, we should let our eyes rest properly, do eye exercises and form good reading habits. Only in these ways can we prevent shortsightedness.

【解析】书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力。写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确。

【范文亮点】

文章中First, students have too much homework to do every day and they are likely to overuse their eyes, thus making their eyes too tired用了现在分词making作结果状语。

Second, some students spend too much time surfing the Internet, which is harmful to their eyes句中which引导非限制性定语从句修饰前面的整个句子内容。

Only in these ways can we prevent shortsightedness倒装句使用精炼。