Question

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有

10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hiking has become popular in China during recent years, and more and more people become hikers, who are calling Donkey Friends (驴友) in Chinese. A discussion about hiking has held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacation can make people to feel healthier, fresher and more harmonious with nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have never been to, and accidents have been happened now and then because poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions which laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

Answer 1

1.calling 改为called.

2.has held 间加been

3.to feel 改为feel

4.deep 改为deeply

5.relaxing 改 为 relaxed

6.have been happened 中的been 去掉

7.because 后加of

8.life 改为lives

9.so 改为 such

10.which 改为 that

【解析】

1.“人们”和“称呼”是被动关系，现在分词. calling 改为called.

2.“讨论”和“举行”是被动关系，has held 间加been。

3.】make somebody do something让某人做某事，因此 to feel 改为feel 。

4.】副词修饰动词，“深深地”修饰“吸引” deep 改为deeply。

5.】人做主语用ed形式，物做主语用ing形式。他们做主语因此relaxing 改 为 relaxed。

6.】“发生”没有被动形式，因此 have been happened 中的been 去掉。

7.因为远足知识的缺乏，because of加名词，因此.because 后加of。

8.】主语是复数形式，失去他们的生命也用复数形式，life 改为lives。

9.】such+冠词+形容词+名词或such +形容词+名词复数形式，因此 so 改为 such。

10.】名词“建议”后面是同位语从句，解释名词的内容，只起连接作用用that，which 改为 that。

考点：短文改错