Question

假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Smith 先生将在你所在的城市工作，希望你为他找一处合适的房子。你正好看到一个房屋出租广告。请按照下面的要点给他发一封电子邮件，告诉他这座房屋的情况。

1房屋的位置：位于商业区

2 楼层：一幢12层公寓楼的8楼。

3 结构：两室一厅（朝南，采光好），一厨一卫。

4 房间的配套设施：空调(air condition)，床，桌，椅，沙发，书柜及

煤气灶具(a gas stove)

5 租金：2000人民币∕月

6 周边环境：购物，交通方便

注意：

1可适当增加细节使内容连贯，语意通顺；

2 120词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Smith,

I am very glad that you will come to work here.

Yours Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Smith,

I am very glad that you will come to work here. You asked me to find an apartment for you and now I’ve found one, which I think may suit you.

The apartment with two bedrooms, a sitting room, a kitchen and a toilet is on the eighth floor of an apartment block. It is well furnished with an air conditioner, a bed, a table, a chair, a set of sofa, a bookcase and a gas stove. The bedrooms and sitting room face south, so they are bright with the sunshine. As the building is located in the downtown, it is very convenient for you to go shopping and take buses or the underground. The rent is 2000 yuan per month.

Please let me know whether you like it or not.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查应用文中的电子邮件的写作。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查应用文电子邮件的写作

点评：本文属于应用文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。